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Summary

  • The initial submission of this article was received on April 18th, 2025 and was peer-reviewed by 2 reviewers and the Academic Editor.
  • The Academic Editor made their initial decision on June 12th, 2025.
  • The first revision was submitted on July 29th, 2025 and was reviewed by 1 reviewer and the Academic Editor.
  • The article was Accepted by the Academic Editor on August 14th, 2025.

Version 0.2 (accepted)

· Aug 14, 2025 · Academic Editor

Accept

Thanks to the authors for their efforts to improve the work. This version addressed the concerns of the reviewers successfully. It can be accepted. Congrats!.

Reviewer 1 ·

Basic reporting

Thank you very much for addressing all my concerns. I appreciate your gentle responses to each of my comments.

Experimental design

Authors provided more information on how the features used to train the model were calculated.

Validity of the findings

Authors described in detail the methods used in the comparison.

Additional comments

Please review the adjective infected in the following sentence of the Section 4.3:

"The digital image resolution is 1500×1000 pixels of which 76 are infected with DR.."

DR is not an infectious disease.

Version 0.1 (original submission)

· Jun 12, 2025 · Academic Editor

Major Revisions

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Reviewer 1 ·

Basic reporting

This paper focuses on improving Diabetic Retinopathy (DR) detection in fundus images by introducing a Graded Region-of-Interest (ROI) Feature Dissection method. The objective is to enhance the identification of micro-level retinal changes for more precise DR detection. The proposed method first identifies the ROI based on maximally differentiated features. Then, feature changes are iteratively validated using a recurrent neural network with a cross-pooling function applied to the edges of the ROI features. The method was evaluated on a publicly available fundus image dataset from the Kaggle repository.

The paper needs a revision to correct some details:

1) Please use italics for equations and variables, for example, n x m.

2) Please ensure that all terms are correctly defined, for example, c_a in Eq. 2.

3) I think that the next expression is not accurate: “of which 76 are infected with DR”. It is because DR is not an infectious disease.

4) Please provide more detailed captions for all Figures and Tables. This will help the reader better understand.

5) Please highlight the best results in Tables 3 and 4, for their better identification.

Experimental design

1) Please provide more information on how the features used to train the model were calculated. This is because the comparative analysis mentions that the features and edges were varied.

2) Can you include the definition of the metrics used to evaluate the performance of the DR detection?

3) Please include the definitions of the metrics used to evaluate the performance of the DR detection method.

4) Did you implement the comparison methods yourself, or did you use existing implementations? Was the detection delay measured using the same computer for all methods?

5) Please provide more details of the dataset used, for example, the number of classes and the number of images per class.

Validity of the findings

1) Can you describe in detail the methods used in the comparison: RTNet (Huang et al., 2022), MCNN-UNet (Skouta et al., 2022), and DRFEC (Das et al., 2023). Did these methods use the same dataset?

2) In the comparative analysis section, it would be welcome to include a discussion of the significant differences between the proposed method and the related works used for this purpose.

Additional comments

1) The work is interesting and the results are sound. However, the description of the proposed method is difficult to follow. I respectfully suggest revising Section 3 to improve clarity and make the methodology easier to understand. It may help to first describe the RNN architecture, followed by the proposed methodology.

Reviewer 2 ·

Basic reporting

1. Language needs major editing for grammar and clarity. Terms like “purses” and “violating changes” are unclear.

2. Equations use non-standard symbols (e.g., “7” for minus) and need proper formatting and variable definitions.

3. Figures are referenced but lack detailed captions and in-text explanations.

4. The introduction does not clearly define the problem gap or articulate the novelty.

5. The related works section is descriptive, not analytical, and there is no clear contrast with the proposed method.

6. Formatting inconsistencies throughout nspacing, notation, and symbol use.

7. References are recent but not well integrated into the discussion.

8. No raw data or code shared, reproducibility is limited.

Experimental design

1. The research objective is relevant, but the experimental design lacks justification for using RNN over other architectures like CNN or Transformers.

2. Dataset details are minimal—no mention of class balance, preprocessing steps, or annotation quality.

3. Evaluation is done on a limited dataset (100 training, 76 testing images), which is insufficient for generalization—needs cross-validation or additional datasets.

4. No ablation study is provided to isolate the impact of the cross-pooling mechanism.

5. Hyperparameter tuning lacks methodology—values are given without explanation of how they were selected.

6. MATLAB implementation on low-resource hardware may limit scalability—needs justification.

7. Data augmentation or regularization methods are not discussed.

Validity of the findings

1. Reported performance gains are promising, but no statistical tests (e.g., p-values, confidence intervals) are provided to validate significance.

2. No qualitative visual results (e.g., segmented images) are shown to support the numerical findings.

3. Comparison with baseline models is limited to a few methods—broader benchmarking is recommended.

4. The RNN-based approach lacks justification for effectiveness over CNN-based detectors commonly used in medical imaging.

5. Error analysis is shallow no discussion of failure cases or model limitations.

6. Claims about improvement in precision and specificity need a clearer linkage to architectural contributions.

Additional comments

1. The manuscript would benefit from citing more recent literature (2023–2024) on diabetic retinopathy detection, especially works involving advanced transformer models, attention mechanisms, or hybrid deep learning approaches.

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2. Several concepts introduced (e.g., cross-pooling violation, memory state in RNN) need clearer explanation with references to related existing methods.

3. The title and abstract should be rephrased to reflect the methodological novelty and main contributions better.

4. Consider simplifying the mathematical formulations and ensuring they are interpretable to a broader audience.

5. The conclusion section should better emphasize limitations and provide a clearer roadmap for future improvements.

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