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Summary

  • The initial submission of this article was received on December 28th, 2022 and was peer-reviewed by 2 reviewers and the Academic Editor.
  • The Academic Editor made their initial decision on March 6th, 2023.
  • The first revision was submitted on March 13th, 2023 and was reviewed by the Academic Editor.
  • The article was Accepted by the Academic Editor on March 15th, 2023.

Version 0.2 (accepted)

· Mar 15, 2023 · Academic Editor

Accept

I recommend it for publication.

[# PeerJ Staff Note - this decision was reviewed and approved by Rong Qu, a PeerJ Computer Science Section Editor covering this Section #]

Version 0.1 (original submission)

· Mar 6, 2023 · Academic Editor

Minor Revisions

Please Revise your paper according to the reviewer's comments.
Thank you very much.

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Basic reporting

The English level of the article is satisfying. Occasionally, some phrases need to be rewritten (to eliminate redundancy) e.g. "The meaning and diversity of paraphrases is evaluated with human evaluations conducted through crowd-sourcing and automatic evaluation."
References are sufficient. SOA is good.
Figures are readable, tables are well explained.
The study hypothesis are presented adequately, and the results show the merit of the research.

Experimental design

The aim of the research is congruent with the purpose of the journal. The only issue I find here is the use of mTurk. I would have first tried to gather data via voluntaries. However, my guess is that your approach doesn't influence at all the results of the study. Nevertheless, I encourage you to further emphasize the use of Amazon mTurk over other means. Another issue is with the ethical consent of the humans involved in any part of the research process. I was wondering if you have requested this prior to their actual involvement.

Validity of the findings

The data in the files supplied is relevant. Conclusions are well written.

Reviewer 2 ·

Basic reporting

This paper provide a new dataset called Expanded-CAst (ECAsT) for The Text REtrieval Conference Conversational assistance track. According to the authors, the ECAst is 665% more extensive in terms of size and language diversity than the CAsT dataset. The ECAsT contains more than 9200 turns. Also, the author mentioned that they use ECAsT to assess the robustness of traditional metrics for conversational evaluation used in CAsT and identify its bias toward language diversity. The authors claims that introducing language diversity via paraphrases in the ECAsT dataset returned up to 24% new passages compared to only 2% using CAsT baseline.

In general, I think this paper is a little bit ambiguous and unclear to me. I did not fully understand how the ECAsT dataset is generated and what are the additional text/semantic resources of the dataset: Does the ECAsT totally comes from expanding the CAsT dataset using rules? The author may want to discuss more about the resources for generating the new dataset.

The references are sufficient in this paper. The background introduction to ECAsT is fairly detailed.

The paper is drafted in a routine structure: Introduction, literature review, methodology, experiments and discussion. Enough details are provided on how to evaluate the proposed new dataset using different metrics.

In general, the authors should provide more details on how the new dataset ECAsT is built: What are the additional text/semantic resources for generating ECAsT (resources beyond CAsT)? But taking the evaluation results using the metrics, I believe that the new dataset is indeed more extensive in terms of size and language diversity comparing to ECAsT.

So, I will recommend minor revision to this paper: Please provide more details on how the new dataset ECAsT is built: What are the text/semantic resources of the dataset?

Experimental design

The authors build the new dataset ECAsT based on the existing benchmark dataset CAsT. Roughly speaking, there are five stages:

Stage 1: Conversational Query Reformulation.
Stage 2: Paraphrasing CAsT Dataset.
Stage 3: Human Evaluation (evaluate generated paraphrases through crowd-sourcing human annotators).
Stage 4: Data Cleaning and Diversification.
Stage 5: Reformulation, Retrieval, and Re-Ranking.

Enough details are provided in each stage. However, after reading through the five stages, I still cannot figure out what are the text/semantic resources for generating ECAsT, except the initial CAsT dataset? The authors should briefly discuss this issue.

Validity of the findings

The authors provide detailed description on how to evaluate the proposed dataset with respect to context removal, paraphrase evaluation, paraphrase diversity, un-judged passage analysis and new QREL effect on performance. Results show that the ECAsT out-performs the CAsT dataset according to the proposed metrics.

Therefore, I think in general the dataset is valuable.

Additional comments

No additional comments.

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