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Summary

  • The initial submission of this article was received on May 15th, 2020 and was peer-reviewed by 3 reviewers and the Academic Editor.
  • The Academic Editor made their initial decision on July 21st, 2020.
  • The first revision was submitted on August 11th, 2020 and was reviewed by 1 reviewer and the Academic Editor.
  • The article was Accepted by the Academic Editor on August 28th, 2020.

Version 0.2 (accepted)

· Aug 28, 2020 · Academic Editor

Accept

Revision has been properly performed.

Reviewer 1 ·

Basic reporting

No further issues. Thank you for addressing my previous concerns.

Experimental design

No further issues. Thank you for addressing my previous concerns.

Validity of the findings

No further issues. Thank you for addressing my previous concerns.

Additional comments

Congratulations on an excellent study and thank you for addressing my previous concerns. I wish you all the best in the future and commend you for your work in such an important humanitarian and socio-political arena.

Version 0.1 (original submission)

· Jul 21, 2020 · Academic Editor

Major Revisions

The authors should deeply describe the statistical analyses performed.

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Reviewer 1 ·

Basic reporting

Generally very well written.

Experimental design

In line 213, the authors should define what type of regression analysis was being performed (I assume univariate and then multivariate linear regression analysis)

It should be clarified in table 3 and table 4 that one of these is univariate linear regression analysis and the other is multivariate linear regression analysis (looking for independent variables).

Most importantly, the variables that are mentioned in Table 1 do not match with some that are in Table 3/4. Tables 3/4 include novel and confronting variables such as violence experiences, abortion, baby loss, which are not previously mentioned in the methods or results. Similarly, Tables 3/4 exclude many variables from Table 1 such as social status, education levels, employment, health insurance, years in Jordan. What is the reasoning behind this extremely confusing discrepancy? Can the authors please keep a consistent note of which variables exactly are being studied and statistically analysed, and just omit all the others?

Validity of the findings

My major concern here is that in the conclusions of the abstract and of the main paper, the authors seem to imply that their study compared Syrian women to women in surrounding Arab populations and found poorer health outcomes. However, this is not reflective of this study which only interviewed Syrian women.

The authors can compare their findings to those of other studies in the discussion, but should make the important caveat that these are studies may have had different methodologies, have been conducted during different socio-political circumstances etc.

They should not claim that this current study has done direct comparison between ethnic groups.

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Basic reporting

The article meets all Basic reporting criteria.
So, No Comment.

Experimental design

No Comment.

Validity of the findings

No Comment.

Additional comments

The article meets all the standard criteria of the journal.

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Basic reporting

No comment

Experimental design

No comment

Validity of the findings

No comment

Additional comments

Refugees who fled Syria included Syrian and Palestinian refugees.
it would be more comprehensive if a sample from Palestine refugees were included but may be added to the recommendation for future research

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