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Introduction: This part should offer a conclusive background for the reader, a requirement that is not adequately met. The reader learns about the special problems of and requirements for sinus surgery, but information about the usual techniques of controlled hypotension is lacking, though there is a large body of data about various effective drugs for this purpose. The authors offer no comprehensible rationale why was the trial performed, and what scientific/clinical benefit was expected.
In addition the introduction lacks exact determination of the objectives of the study, such as 1., 2. etc.
The prospective randomised trial compared sufentanil/clonidine versus Remifentanil anesthesia, both with sevoflurane for sedation in otherwise comparable groups undergoing sinus surgery.
Please explain why clonidine was investigated.
Please explain 'time to eye opening' as well as 'extubation time'. If the respective time interval starts at the end of surgery (last stitch, dressing done) it is quite long in both groups. Please explain.
Methods: The sample size calculation is based on a study which is not further explained.
Except this the methods are adequately explained.
Overall both anaesthetic procedures worked well; no relevant complications occurred, no patient was suffering from postoperative nausea and vomiting. Central findings of the study are that patients with remifentanil compared to those with clonidine/sufentanil had a shorter time to eye opening, but similar extubation time; their vasopressor requirement was higher and so was their pain score after surgery, and their requirement of postoperative piritramide. Though patients mean O2Sat in the recovery room was similar between the two groups, at discharge patients with remifentanil required more frequently supplemental oxygen. Finally using remifentanil instead of clonidine/sufentanil is more expensive.
The design of the study leads to results with adequate validity.
Discussion: The authors repeat their findings without discussing crucial issues, for example oxygen demand of patients with remifentanil, an ultra-short acting opiate. Instead they waste 5 references to discuss the oxygen requirement of smokers, which is not relevant in their study.
It is a technically well conducted study, but unfortunately lacking both a comprehensible rationale and an adequate discussion of the findings. I generally sympathize with scientific groups, trying hard to make a nice study, and often have to fight for publication in a good journal, but following a Journal's rules and regulations alone doesn't do the trick.
Study design and research question need some clarification. The authors investigate the effect of a very old, very well known drug, clonidine. Controlled hypotension is applied mainly with inhalation anesthetics or short acting highly effective drugs, such as Nitroglycerin, sodium nitroprusside, adenosine, and Esmolol (1). Clonidine seems to be effective mainly when given before surgery for premedication (2); however, compared to others it has a quite long half-life-time and a slow clearance (s. below). It is definitely not the number one drug of choice for controlled hypotension. In addition Remifentanil is first and foremost a strong analgesic and not an antihypertensive agent. Its cardiovascular side effects can be used and are appreciated in certain situations; however its dosage is determined by the analgesic requirement of the individual patient.
The differences between the groups regarding quality and duration of postoperative analgesia are not surprising, considering the half-life-time of Remi, Sufenta and Clonidine, which is 9, 150, and 420-660 minutes respectively. Moreover, it is well known that the analgesic effect of clonidine lasts 6 - 12 hours (3).
From my point of view, there has to be a comprehensible explanation why the study was done at all (Introduction), and a comprehensive discussion about some of the findings, such as the higher oxygen demand in Remi patients when discharged from PACU, something that is not confirmed within the literature. Why was the extubation time similar, whereas eye opening In Remi patients was about 3 minutes earlier?
Finally elaborate on the financial aspect. Considering costs of machines, maintenance of facilities and most of all manpower, the costs of anesthetic drugs are neglectable.
Drug, Onset of action (min), Half Life (min), Clearance (L/min)
Nitroglycerine 3 - 5, 3, 25
Sodium nitroprusside 1 - 2, 2, 9 - 55
Adenosine 0.1 – 0.35, 0.15, high
Esmolol 2 - 10, 9, 18.5
CLONIDINE i.v. 10, 420 - 660, 0.2
1. Degoute CS. Controlled hypotension: a guide to drug choice. Drugs 2007; 67: 1053-76.
2. Wawrzyniak K, Burduk PK, Cywinski JB, Kusza K, Kazmierczak W. Improved quality of surgical field during endoscopic sinus surgery after clonidine premedication--a pilot study. Int.Forum Allergy Rhinol. 2014; 4: 542-7.
3. Bharti N, Dontukurthy S, Bala I, Singh G. Postoperative analgesic effect of intravenous (i.v.) clonidine compared with clonidine administration in wound infiltration for open cholecystectomy. Br.J.Anaesth. 2013; 111: 656-61.
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Line 78, Fromme score not Fromme score score.
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Authors should use median and interquartile range instead of mean ± SD in all tables.
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The authors use descriptive statistics to present their data. But they should use median and interquartile range instead of mean ± SD because nonparametric test is used in the analysis. And authors should explain why they used nonparametric test? And also, authors should write the full name of statistical methods on the titles of Tables 3-4. Readers can mistake the title "Wilcoxon test".
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