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Summary

  • The initial submission of this article was received on January 25th, 2021 and was peer-reviewed by 2 reviewers and the Academic Editor.
  • The Academic Editor made their initial decision on March 2nd, 2021.
  • The first revision was submitted on March 27th, 2021 and was reviewed by 1 reviewer and the Academic Editor.
  • A further revision was submitted on April 30th, 2021 and was reviewed by 1 reviewer and the Academic Editor.
  • A further revision was submitted on June 9th, 2021 and was reviewed by the Academic Editor.
  • A further revision was submitted on June 22nd, 2021 and was reviewed by the Academic Editor.
  • The article was Accepted by the Academic Editor on June 23rd, 2021.

Version 0.5 (accepted)

· Jun 23, 2021 · Academic Editor

Accept

Thank you very much for your patience in revising the manuscript as suggested

[# PeerJ Staff Note - this decision was reviewed and approved by Bob Patton, a PeerJ Section Editor covering this Section #]

Version 0.4

· Jun 9, 2021 · Academic Editor

Minor Revisions

Please specify the number of infants included in each of the 3 cohort groups, as already asked by the reviewer in the previous submission. In the revised manuscript I read only the age of infants in the three cohort groups. You may have only tested (several times) one infant at different ages.

Version 0.3

· May 23, 2021 · Academic Editor

Minor Revisions

Please write the number of infants included in each of the 3 cohort groups (see comments of the referee).

Reviewer 3 ·

Basic reporting

The ms addresses the issue of how to best model quantitatively infant habituation using probabilistic approaches. The topic is important since infant habituation is a critical tool to study the development of perception, attention, and other cognitive abilities in infants. The main result is that partial-pooling models provided more accurate predictions.

Experimental design

The authors compared various additive and multiplicative regression models of habituation to fit looking times of a habituation experiment with infants in three age cohorts (4, 7 and 10 months). They used visual stimuli consisting of rectangles with different luminance, color and orientation. Overall, 359 experiments were performed.
The authors tested 5 probability distributions: truncated normal, truncated normal with exponential mean, lognormal, Weibull, and gamma distribution.

Validity of the findings

Results showed that partial-pooling models provided more accurate predictions than the no-pooling models, reducing the bias due to over-fitting inherent in no-pooling models. The multiplicative trend models and the gamma trend model in particular provided better data fit, better predictive fit, and lower parameter correlation.
In the Discussion the authors address the potential role of confound stimuli associated with the presentation of test stimuli.

Additional comments

Overall, the ms has been carefully revised relative to previous reviewers’ comments. As a minor comment, I noticed that (unless I missed it!) the number of infants included in each of the 3 cohort groups is not specified, only the number of trials included for each condition in each cohort group is given in Table 1.

Version 0.2

· Apr 14, 2021 · Academic Editor

Minor Revisions

One reviewer has raised concerns about your revised manuscript. I kindly invite you to carefully revise your manuscript along the lines suggested by the reviewers in their comments to the previous version of your manuscript.

Please see also the comments to the revised version of the manuscript.

Reviewer 1 ·

Basic reporting

See attachment

Experimental design

See attachment

Validity of the findings

See attachment

Additional comments

See attachment

Annotated reviews are not available for download in order to protect the identity of reviewers who chose to remain anonymous.

Version 0.1 (original submission)

· Mar 2, 2021 · Academic Editor

Minor Revisions

Both reviewers have raised concerns about your manuscript. Considering their comments and the editorial criteria of the journal, I would like to invite you to carefully revise your manuscript along the lines suggested.

Please see the annotated PDFs from the reviewers.

Reviewer 1 ·

Basic reporting

Seems OK

Experimental design

Seems OK; design was approved.

Validity of the findings

OK, likely to have little impact on the field.

Additional comments

I've made comments in the attached review which is to be shared with the author.

Annotated reviews are not available for download in order to protect the identity of reviewers who chose to remain anonymous.

Reviewer 2 ·

Basic reporting

No comment.

Experimental design

See attached.

Validity of the findings

No comment.

Additional comments

See attached.

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